Today when it rained, I prayed…
As I heard the first sound of the pour, I asked those drops to lift the hatred as they fall
It drizzled and reminded me of better days and I heard this shower telling me that there are more on their way
The clouds roared but today they didn’t scare me for I heard this downpour will wash away all the existing pain
I never loved rain as much as I did in that moment, it carried hope and I felt it through the fragrance that lingered
Soon, the raindrops stopped kissing the parched land, slowed the pace lifting a heavy weight from the Earth’s face
I lay there on my crumpled sheets wondering how I’ll write about this pour of peace and what I sent its way.
This is so beautiful. I often think about how rain is a symbol of washing away all of the bad stuff, nourishing our land and our souls. A very thought provoking post!
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That is so kind of you! Thank you so much for reading and leaving such motivating words here 💕💕
You are right, rain symbolizes the fading away of all that’s negative.🌺
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the ending is SO good. seriously – I can imagine the scene in your words, and “what I sent its way” recalls earlier lines of the poem. I loved this.
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I am so glad that you found it a good read! It feels amazing to read such nice and motivating words. Thank you so much. It truly means a lot! 🌺
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This is gorgeous! I love how you have portrayed rain as something that purifies and takes away the bad. ✨
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Hey, thank you Rishika! That’s how rains make me feel and I decided to pen it down after a soothing rainy day!
You are the kindest. ❤️
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I love this. I sometimes get the same feeling of washing away and renewal, but never have I seen the feeling expressed so beautifully.
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Wow! Thank you so much for stopping by and reading this. I am so grateful for your kind words!
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Wow!! Amazing post. Well presented.
Loved it.👍😊
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Thank you so much! This means a lot 💕🌺
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Pleasure 😊
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Such a beautiful post! Rain just seems to make everything new again.
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Thank you so much for reading and appreciating! Your kinds words mean a lot to me ❤️
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You’re so welcome! 🙂
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This is wonderful.
Loved this poem.
Great job Sonali.
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You are an amazing person, Simran! Can’t thank you enough for this appreciation ❤️
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Thats really sweet of you to say.
Thank you so much. This really means a lot to me.
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You’re welcome 💕
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much! ❤️❤️
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